小勒一多多 发表于 2020-10-4 01:24:14

We are good friend if you like motorbike too!

In recent days,we have to face a problem in shanghai,traffic jam. Which is becoming more and more serious,the air quality in shanghai is getting worse cause of cars gas emissions.

Confronted with traffic jam this problem , I think we should let government heard our opinion! We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,we should encourage our citizens travel by public traffic,such as bus and metro. For another,limited the quantity of cars.Finally,encourage the citizens travel by motorbike .

Personally I believe that the third way,travel by motorbike is the best way to solve the traffic jam and meanwhile it can improve the air quality .Air environment will be better than before .People in big city don’t like waste so many times on traffic. They can do more things if they live without traffic jam .

Consequently,I am confident that a bright future is awaiting us because we choose motorbike!

希望英语大神来帮我纠正一下语法或者词组搭配错误。套用了英语写作模版https://wap.591moto.com/public/emotion/face_011.png



李家老爷 发表于 2020-10-4 01:40:26

gooda。。

卖车啦卖车啦 发表于 2020-10-4 04:00:42

aimy1981 发表于 2020-10-4 06:32:17

Your English is horse horse tiger tiger https://wap.591moto.com/public/emotion/face_018.png

Lizzie 发表于 2020-10-4 08:04:20

aimy1981 发表于 2020-10-04 06:32
Your English is horse horse tiger tiger

马马虎虎？

春风650i 发表于 2020-10-4 08:17:16

来带你兜风

摩托小白883 发表于 2020-10-4 08:49:37

竞速都能学英语了，不错

席翁的救赎 发表于 2020-10-4 08:53:13

I think you are taking matrix. but I have no evidence

范知行 发表于 2020-10-4 10:55:11

什么乱七八糟的 空气质量不好怪机动车，那可以看看美国大城市多少车然后天有多蓝 交通拥堵换摩托出行去东南亚或者潮汕看看 全是摩托照样堵个瓷实。

bflyb 发表于 2020-10-4 11:23:00

let government heard

limited the quantity

encourage our citizens travel

语法错的应该比较多，比较明显的粗粗看出几个
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